slow sips

May 3, 2011

Slowly

these eyelids

drip in reverse.

Allowing

a few notes,

maybe even a verse.

If compounded slivers

will eventually disperse…

please, skip

 the monotony

and get to

desert.

 

 

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4 Responses to “slow sips”

  1. i like this piece, especially the idea of eyelids dripping in reverse. magnifique! (: xx

  2. woih said

    thank you

    ” eyelids dripping in reverse” makes me happy …and a lil’ sleepy

  3. Jingle said

    stunning..

    🙂

  4. Jingle said

    you write well.

    hope to see you join poetry potluck today.
    bless you.

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