Hearts’ well

September 23, 2010

You’ll find them here speaking of love

The harsh let downs and the skies above

From white to blue they are diverse

and the same is said about their verse

Divorced, adopted, married and single

Smooth, young skin and finely aged wrinkles

Come from the depths simply to mingle 

at Thursdays Poets Rally,  in the den of Jingle.

                     For Thursdays Poets Rally by JIngle:

                     http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/

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47 Responses to “Hearts’ well”

  1. Jingle said

    this is very hot or vivid portrayal of hearts…
    beautiful and simple,
    love your style!
    Cheers!

  2. kyoichi said

    i’m in the green zone.

    😀

  3. brian said

    got to love the diversity of our world….

  4. Shashi said

    Very well said Jingle…. liked the way you have captured all the people out here sharing their diverse thoughts and feelings…

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Connect with me on Twitter at @VerseEveryDay to read one verse everyday on life, love and longing…

  5. megzone said

    aawww..sweeet 🙂
    lovely poem and beautiful flow of words 😀

    Here from Jingle’s Rally
    You can find my poem at
    http://megzone.wordpress.com/2010/09/22/sleep-walking/

  6. Olivia said

    Wonderful that s- very very creative.. 🙂 a very fine job.. Happy Rally
    http://oliviasmindlymatters.wordpress.com/2010/04/24/678/

  7. frayedges said

    Haha! I love it. It really captures the spirit. Nicely done!

  8. Love it, love it, love it! It is so darn clever it just slays me.

  9. Rajlakshmi said

    really from all parts of the wprl we mingle here…
    beautifully said.

    http://thepoetrywagon.blogspot.com/2010/09/souvenir.html

  10. Bodhirose said

    Loved this! This is a nice introduction to my very first Jingle rally–I join the smooth-skinned and the wrinkled!

  11. tracyhsays said

    Well done…a clever piece indeed 🙂

    Rally On!

  12. Absolutely fabulous. Clever! I love it … big smile! 🙂

    Thank you for this. Happy Rally days!

  13. Christine said

    Just adore this! For ABC Wednesday, I wrote a Jingle poem here: http://ibrewhaiku.blogspot.com/2010/09/j-is-for-jingle.html

  14. Someone Is Special said

    Lovely poem woih.. clever image..

    –Someone Is Special–

  15. ha ha ha

    you are so right!!! ji’s rallies are the best thing about being here.

    AWESOME right 🙂 *applause*

  16. deadpoet88 said

    Wow, this is brilliant! And so true! Thanks to Jingle, so many people from all over the world, young and old, with so many different experiences, come together! Great feeling, isn’t it?

  17. hehe 🙂
    that’s a nice twist on what seemed like a conventional sort of poem 😉
    xx

  18. Nice rally. Fun. Love and Light, Sender

  19. Wow, so very cleverly done…I loved it…Happy Rally my friend xxx

  20. Chris G. said

    Great flow and image–all around a wonderful poem. Happy Rally!

  21. Uncle Tree said

    You dove into the flame, sir.
    And came away with the fiery truth.
    Well said! Peace, UT

  22. penelopephoebe said

    Cute poem. Made me smile.

  23. Fay Slimm said

    I love this extensive list of whom, given the chance want to find, read or write about love – this verse images the flame of desire in all who gather for such fiery reasons and it flows with the spirit of friendship to poets who open their hearts. A first-class read.

  24. Jingle said

    Glad to see so many poets reading your talent,
    please return favors to poets who were here…

    Happy Tuesday!
    Cheers!
    I value your participation.

  25. Jingle said

    I reread it,
    wow,
    you have put Jingle and her Rally in your poem…
    how sweet of you.
    Blessings.

  26. 2zpoint said

    LOL! sounds like a pick up bar I seen along time ago! very funny… I like your humor!

  27. I love your writing style, this poem is very cute ^^

  28. ana said

    This made me smile. 🙂

  29. ~meredith said

    You write so very well… in every venue. Reading your work is a gift to the spirit.

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