Hearts’ well
September 23, 2010
You’ll find them here speaking of love
The harsh let downs and the skies above
From white to blue they are diverse
and the same is said about their verse
Divorced, adopted, married and single
Smooth, young skin and finely aged wrinkles
Come from the depths simply to mingle
at Thursdays Poets Rally, in the den of Jingle.
For Thursdays Poets Rally by JIngle:
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/
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this is very hot or vivid portrayal of hearts…
beautiful and simple,
love your style!
Cheers!
i’m in the green zone.
😀
got to love the diversity of our world….
@brian…yes, I do as well
@kyoichi……:) big smiles..thank you
@jingle….tahnks as always for your support
Very well said Jingle…. liked the way you have captured all the people out here sharing their diverse thoughts and feelings…
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Connect with me on Twitter at @VerseEveryDay to read one verse everyday on life, love and longing…
I’m happy you feel they were all captured. That is what I was going for. Thanks for stopping in.
aawww..sweeet 🙂
lovely poem and beautiful flow of words 😀
Here from Jingle’s Rally
You can find my poem at
http://megzone.wordpress.com/2010/09/22/sleep-walking/
thank you meg…I really enjoy your writings as well.
Wonderful that s- very very creative.. 🙂 a very fine job.. Happy Rally
http://oliviasmindlymatters.wordpress.com/2010/04/24/678/
Happy rally Olivia!Thank you
Haha! I love it. It really captures the spirit. Nicely done!
Thank you so very much
Love it, love it, love it! It is so darn clever it just slays me.
honored to slay:)
really from all parts of the wprl we mingle here…
beautifully said.
http://thepoetrywagon.blogspot.com/2010/09/souvenir.html
yes..love the mingling.thank you for stopping in
Very nice description of everyone.
http://klarocca2010.wordpress.com/2010/09/21/a-poets-song
thank you Kimberly. It dosen’t nearly capture the great experiences I receive from all those in this community
Loved this! This is a nice introduction to my very first Jingle rally–I join the smooth-skinned and the wrinkled!
Oh..thank you and WELCOME TO THE RALLY! I’m somewhere in the middle, not quite wrinkled but certainly not smooth
Well done…a clever piece indeed 🙂
Rally On!
Thank you Tracy..I love the word indeed. I find myself wanting to work it into conversation constantly.HA!..really
Absolutely fabulous. Clever! I love it … big smile! 🙂
Thank you for this. Happy Rally days!
Happy rally to you! To ME! TO US ALL! big smiles here too. Thank you
Just adore this! For ABC Wednesday, I wrote a Jingle poem here: http://ibrewhaiku.blogspot.com/2010/09/j-is-for-jingle.html
Thank you Christine.On my way to check it out now
Lovely poem woih.. clever image..
–Someone Is Special–
Thank you. Really like your name. Someone IS special
ha ha ha
you are so right!!! ji’s rallies are the best thing about being here.
AWESOME right 🙂 *applause*
Wow, this is brilliant! And so true! Thanks to Jingle, so many people from all over the world, young and old, with so many different experiences, come together! Great feeling, isn’t it?
hehe 🙂
that’s a nice twist on what seemed like a conventional sort of poem 😉
xx
Nice rally. Fun. Love and Light, Sender
Wow, so very cleverly done…I loved it…Happy Rally my friend xxx
Great flow and image–all around a wonderful poem. Happy Rally!
You dove into the flame, sir.
And came away with the fiery truth.
Well said! Peace, UT
Cute poem. Made me smile.
I love this extensive list of whom, given the chance want to find, read or write about love – this verse images the flame of desire in all who gather for such fiery reasons and it flows with the spirit of friendship to poets who open their hearts. A first-class read.
Glad to see so many poets reading your talent,
please return favors to poets who were here…
Happy Tuesday!
Cheers!
I value your participation.
I reread it,
wow,
you have put Jingle and her Rally in your poem…
how sweet of you.
Blessings.
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LOL! sounds like a pick up bar I seen along time ago! very funny… I like your humor!
I love your writing style, this poem is very cute ^^
Claps Claps Claps! I loved it! precise!
Me here:
http://puplumages.wordpress.com/2010/09/01/the-exorbitantly-priced-smile/
This made me smile. 🙂
You write so very well… in every venue. Reading your work is a gift to the spirit.