Time to go
September 8, 2010
His father spoke;
“It’s the deadliest creature in the world.”
But it gave water grace simply by its presence
His mind melted towards her
He tried to turn it away
Again and again, he tried to turn his mind away
She’s the loveliest creature I have ever encountered
Never could I have dreamnt of such a creation as you
For you, life leaves it slumber and resumes it’s dance
These were his thoughts
But she was gone
He now felt the reality of his fathers’ words
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beautifully written.
thanks for the contribution!
your focus is participants,
let me know after you are done..
I value your talent here…
parents’ words do have values, they come from life time experiences.
This has a lovely flow. I couldn’t help thinking this was about love and loss.
“For you, life leaves it slumber and resumes it’s dance” what a great verse this poem makes me think of Mermaids? thanks for the great read!
This is truly amazing written!=D I can feel the sadness flow within this poem :<
wonderfully written, I had to read it twice once to read it a second time to enjoy it cuz it was good lol
Love.. Lady.. Loss..
It was sad..
This is my entry:
https://oliviasmindlymatters.wordpress.com/2010/08/29/divine-desires/
All the very Best
Olivia
Nice write! Thanks for sharing!
WWOOWW… nice one here dear 🙂
m here from Jingle’s rally…
you can read my rally poem at
http://megzone.wordpress.com/2010/09/09/why/
Awesome.
One is sort of lead into simply staring at the screen remembering things said by important people in ones life.
Thanks for sharing,
Peace,
http://notjeffery1.wordpress.com/2010/08/18/silence/
(My entry for the rally)
Very thought provoking, Thank you Kx
http://kashaw.wordpress.com/2010/08/27/casino-jinks/
how are you? please return favors to poets,
let me know after you are done 18 NEW poets.
Cheers!
I too had to read this twice. Well written my friend. Bisous, Love and Light, Sender
Sad but good. I like it(:
My Poets Rally Poem: http://robinelizabeth58.wordpress.com/2010/08/05/falling-august-5-2010/
Big sigh. The ultimate sadness, but I am still thinking mermaid here.
It was a jellyfish. But i think a mermaid certainly fits.
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Hello, friend:
Monday Poetry Potluck Is NOW open, linking is open from Sunday 8pm to Tuesday, 8pm, welcome join us by linking in 1 to 3 poems, you could use an old poem, the more you share, the happier we are…hurry up!
Thanks in advance.
Hope to see you in our lovely potluck…