the Tide

August 23, 2010

Friend in pain from heart stretched thin
The ties that pull at the organ within
Across a plane that blurs from sight
This very pain that is the path of rite

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3 Responses to “the Tide”

  1. Jingle said

    the first line immediately rocks.
    well done poem.

    A++

  2. belladonna23 said

    great structure, awesome diction 🙂
    talk about a way to verbally paint a poem!

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